學生作品〔我地好比心機做ga！〕

[nic_nic]

這個是我同組員一齊努力成果︰

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0FhTQLKWu1k

煩麻各位去到呢條link望一望，兼留下你地既意見，
你地既意見對我地來講系好寶貴兼超級重要ga..........
〔因為我地會拿黎做presentation呢！〕

請各位多多多多多多多多多多多多多多多多多多幫忙！
Thank you very very very very very very very very very very much!

[h2o]

stop animation 近來比較少見, 再加上少少既 effects 都唔錯


comment 方面, 我都系講下 lighting 先. 行雷閃電那場用 cool color 會好d, 依家就咁睇落去以為系黃昏既時間, 出太陽.

閃電光度可以更強, 仲有系出完閃光, 隔一兩秒先有聲架:
http://www.weather.gov.hk/education/edu ... rmc.htm#q4


講番朝早那場... 顏色我都覺得太黃, 起初以為你想講佢訓到好晏, 17:15 既黃昏... 你試下去 after effects 改 hue, 偏藍藍紫紫會唔會好d


另外 向日葵畫得唔系咁似

[陳根]

idea ok…但故事連接唔倒，講o既野一截截咁... 加入o既優默感欠缺新意…如果響人堆中走過系用戰場而唔系足球場，對主角o既心理障礙會描繪得更貼切。

技巧: 無論響表達能力同制作水准上仲有好遠o既路要行...

如果你問緊大家意見，不如你自己講下自己覺得呢個作品有咩優點同缺點。

見笑。

[milkboy]

一截截咁系因為用左文字間場，要忍住唔好用，盡量用故仔表達，含蓄忍耐是美德....

仲有，拍烏蠅拍到落女仔個胸，現實冇；睇到花開感覺人生有望，假的。

改搭車日日見到擬似蔡加怡靚女，怨念地日日追蹤，而且佢竟然未有bf，感到人生充滿希望。

[ξ]

I can read the concept of the story, however, you may try hard to improve the sense of beauty and the create a main focus for each shots. At least the character design. ^ ^

[A00017940]

hi,
I think its a good start and sure it has room for improvement. Motion-wise, you may want to pay attention to the character's antics, follow-through, and drag. Look for area that you can put more weight to the character to give more life to it. The basic principals also apply for stop motion too.....

keep up the good work!!

[ξ]

Are you guys the graduated from LMU!? This is yours final project right!? hahahaa!!!