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[JrMan]

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[jacky167]

建議先多習中練習其中一樣SKILL

如果想做VFX/ANIAMTION 要再努力

[JrMan]

多謝指點XD!

[A00017940]

The animation is not bad but could be better. Pay more attention on the weight shift for the hips, you should have rotated the hip on the Z-axis a lot for the poses of your characters here. And the overlapping and follow-through of the spine could be more fiulded but tune-down just a little and extended to the head. Just keep in mind that most of the actions your characters performed here would started from the hip and you will do just fine.
I like the timing and the clear poses for the first part of EN114A.

just my 2 cents