This is my first model....蓮藕仔

[Maya初仔]

http://mayaray.netfirms.com/
Hi,
This is my first model. Pls give some advise. i knew i still have many things to improve!
Many tks!

[tdk]

very nice for a first try.

may be the bump need to increase a bit.

keep up the good work.

[Maya初仔]

Many tks tdk! i will increase the bump more! And will make the texture more details! Also, i will make a cloth for him too !! 3D is really fun!!! Right!?
But i will make a revision after the school final ! i will post it again!!

[HapZungLam]

I m thinkinga bout maybe he is too clean.

Not only the texture. (you said you will modify your texture. then let's talk about the texure after you did it)

Generally is pretty good. But they are too symetrical. Probably you mirror one side to another. try to rendamize abond hands and legs. it will give better FXs.

[Maya初仔]

U are right! He's too clean!! Tks "HapZungLam"^_^ !

Re texture. i want to paint it with painter more destails on it (Like dirty brown)! Make it more realistic! Then add more different dump on it! Some place is big size dump, some place is a line....something like that..! Cos, not enough time to do it....

Re Mirror. i didn't mirror the hands and legs. i made them individually! Maybe they are too similiar...

Re. FXs. Really sorry. What is FXs...i really don't know what does it mean!

Hope u can understand my HK style Englacish...

Tks again!

[rryria]

FXs=effects

i dont know why f and x stands for it(maybe the pronounciation)
but surly it explains like that
SFX=Special Effect
DVE=Digital Visual Effect

p.s. your model's shading is nice!

[Maya初仔]

Many tks for yr information! "rryria"!

[HapZungLam]

FX, try to say it fast. which means "effects". we usually use this word as a short form of effects.

Give you a little tip. I usually use real photographs when texturing.

Using different photographs in different layers with different blend mode. usually will give good "fx".

paint from scretch is a good idea but something you will never able to paint it out.

[Maya初仔]

Tks HapZumgLam!!
I will noted yr tip! Cos, i'm still a new guy in this field!! So, i still need to study more more in modeling first!! Cos, i use 70% times for this model of the probject that i have to finish in two weeks!!!
Do u know my tutor gave us 4 weeks times for the simple project!!
But i used 2 weeks time to watch World cup.....So, i think i will do better if i didn't watch the WCup.....
Yr are right! Something we really can't paint it out........
Tks!