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Hi. Guys.

This is my wip short animation film.

[flash width=425 height=344 loop=false]http://www.youtube.com/watch/v/VRNzpt6uMss[/flash]

I have proposed the final scene to show a 'superhero' (except the cape is still under way) to knock down the bad guy,
but i am still not yet satisfy with the ending...
Comments and suggestions are welcome...

Cheers & Thanks!

nice work.

This is awesome man.....
keep up the good work.

cheers

Nice. Very solid, love the foot works. Just a friendly reminder, there's a small pop on the right knee when she opens the door.

Keep it up!

stantang 寫:Nice. Very solid, love the foot works. Just a friendly reminder, there's a small pop on the right knee when she opens the door.

Keep it up!

Thanks! 多è¬

pretty good O.O!!

如果sc05 兩嚇動作同timing 唔同d 會有趣好多(依家有d似copy key fram)

sc04a 第一個反應個口唔好開咁大.....第一個反應系察覺~見到後先驚..(依家有d先讀)

animation so good

good job

Very good!! Nice timing! and fluid movement.

Just a little suggestion:

SC01

The staging at the first shot is a little too symmetrical. Maybe you can break the pose the way she stand, give her a little more body gesture.

SC05

Agree with Christie: "如果sc05 兩嚇動作同timing 唔同d 會有趣好多(依家有d似copy key fram) "

Last Scene

Hmm...有D好似未完咁...好以再好D， 但系一時諗唔到


Good job!! 加油

[quote="kingnt66"]Very good!! Nice timing! and fluid movement.

Just a little suggestion:

SC01

The staging at the first shot is a little too symmetrical. Maybe you can break the pose the way she stand, give her a little more body gesture.

SC05

Agree with Christie: "如果sc05 兩嚇動作å

Hi. Everyone...

[flash width=640 height=505 loop=false]http://www.youtube.com/watch/v/YZNwC84QAvo[/flash]


It's been a while since the last post, i have managed to revised and light the animation, would like to hear from your comments and feedbacks!

Cheers!

雖然內容唔算豐富，但人物動作及鏡頭運用都做得有水准。努力。

好好！加油~！

cool stuff!! =D