CG-Forum.com

作者 : Patrick Wong ( HapZungLam )
使用軟件 : Softimage | XSI 1.5 - 3.0 / Photoshop 6.0 - 7.01
E- mail : hapuznglam@yahoo.com
個人網站 : http://www.eccentrix.com/artist/hapzunglam/index.html

Title: 3rdsolution Stills

這女子是否HapZungLam名字下的女子? 有否全身相睇?
但鼻及頭發做得不是太好啊!

見到你話系softimage expert,又玩o左幾年3D,又經常見你o系外國網站俾好多suggestion其他人, 我以為你好勁但老實講,真系以為系初學者o既作品.
我不是想撩交嗌,只是有點失望,我一直以為你很勁,在外地玩3D,又玩了很多年,但..

Vector , 你可能真系唔想"撩交嗌" , 但我就覺得你的說話只是惡意的打擊作者 , 很不專重他 .

如果各位要批評作品, 請提出作品有問題地方或需要改善的方法, 或交流制作的過程找作品出現的問題等等... 而不是說空話的打擊作者


我希望各位專重一下有心post 自己作品上來的朋友 !

you are not the first one who say i am just a beginner. Well, then i guess i should admit it.

I remember an uncle of mine reminds me that being an artist, always been to 2 stages, "eye high, hand low; hand high, eye low"

Is a chinese frase. Eye high means you can critique, knows what's wrong but "hand low" your skills can't reach the thing you are expecting. Or the other way, You can make good stuff, but can't point out what's wrong with it.

These 2 stage always are barriers of artist. 2 years ago, i am hand high eye low. Now is the other way around.

This model is created at the beginning of the year. Due to differet project and i used too much time on creating scenes. This model become out dated.

Now, i am creating another scene for her. is mainly targetting on textures. compare to this girl's texture that i made, there has a huge different.

希望不介意我又o差把口過來, "HapZungLam"的作品雖不算是出色那一類,但 "某君" 也希望你明白這也是人家的心血,做了出來給同好欣賞,好的你咪贊幾句囉,唔好的也希望你指教而碰不是在這裡 "踩人"啊!
如果個個都像你一樣,還有什麼人會把作品登上網呢?到時像你這像出色的"踩人"學家也不能在這出現.

Oh! 無論 HapZungLam 的作品是否專業級不重要~ 至少我砌不到少女的 Model ..
(只識砌機械 ) 所以是幾佩服的 ~ hehe 雖然我鍾意正面多D =)

Oh ~ 講回技術~
從面相和鎖骨位就知用了不少心機~
當然正如HapZungLam所說這是比較舊的.... So 不如期待佢下一個作品啦!!~
人是要有鼓勵先可以進步和生存的!! hehe~ (拍手)

看上去好似欠缺一些highlight 似的... 是故意的嗎?

等別是頭發的 anisotropic highlight, lips... ...


p.s. 你地識build model 都好... 我只系識等朋友俾model我玩 ^^



( 點解成日認為身在外地的人,做cg 會勁d?? 身在香港不可以做一些特別的 animation 俾外國人看嗎? eg 法國的人很喜歡試不同的 material 來做animation, 我看香港的 animation 總是少了一些實驗性質的作品, 未層經歷過不同的試驗, 又怎可建立屬於自己的style?? )

對不起啊! HapZungLam
正如你所說, 我就是一個不折不扣的眼高手低的人. 希望你別介意我給你的批評.

I don't mind Vector's thread. I am sure he is not do it on perpose. As he said, he is kind of disappointed. Only base on this, i really need to introspect.

The reason i post my work on net isn't because i want to show off. But to get ideas, critisize, get improve.

h20: "看上去好似欠缺一些highlight 似的... 是故意的嗎?"

i am not 故意 but at the beginning of the year, i am just new to XSI, i really don't know how to apply a specular for the hair . Now i just tired to change it anymore. since i have this model imported into many scenes, if i need to touch up every textures, i rather rebuild.

Iori Keith 寫:對不起啊! HapZungLam
正如你所說, 我就是一個不折不扣的眼高手低的人. 希望你別介意我給你的批評.

Sure i won't mind. You reminds me that i need to pay more attention on to the hair and nose.

I think HapZungLam is not the noly one who get benefits, we all get benefits from the flaws in other works. Therefore, any comments, whether good or bad is always welcome.

很好的作品 , 請問近期有否新作共大家觀賞

厲害喔，很漂亮！

矢吹丈 寫:Vector , 你可能真系唔想"撩交嗌" , 但我就覺得你的說話只是惡意的打擊作者 , 很不專重他 .

如果各位要批評作品, 請提出作品有問題地方或需要改善的方法, 或交流制作的過程找作品出現的問題等等... 而不是說空話的打擊作者


我希望各位專重一下有心post 自己作品上來的朋友 !

i'm totally agree 矢吹丈!!!
Especially "不是說空話的打擊作者"