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請給些意見, 有機會遲D post 條片上來, 謝謝

too blurry that i can't critique.....

1 thing tho. the skiy doesn't fit.

氣氛幾好喎!

油尖旺風雲變色行古惑記.........




(ps.長腿叔叔真好睇)

謝謝大家的意見, Blur 系 style 問題, 目的系想做到好似寶麗來的感覺, 其次自己覺得 blur blur 地比較有神秘感....

我有些少意見想提出, 希望會有幫助:
1)前景(人)與背景(大廈)的光源不同
人的左面光,表示光源是在左上方,在同一光源情況下,背景大廈應該是右手邊(持槍)的'食'光而較亮,相反左手邊的背光應該較暗
2)晾衣竹太規律
從大廈伸出來的晾衣竹太直太整齊,好似dupliacte咁
3)天台天線透視有啲問題
天線又系同一款dupliacte出嚟,同埋x,y,z axis 應該有啲變化,唔使全部都見到'魚骨'
會唔會考慮加啲flare?
努力!!!

haha.....其實真系 dupliacte 出來的, 我只起了一座舊樓再 dupliacte, 本想起多幾座, 可惜無時間
而光源因為背影系用 mental ray render, 人就 Maya software, 所以燈光有少少唔同....睇來我要從新做過張 poster la

You mention that this is a poster right? not a shot from your animation right? Poster needs composition. You need to have some design flow and focal point for audience to focus.

I don't have a problem with the objects composition. but the color and lighting need to tweak abit. Such as, if you want ppl to focus on a area, you better make it clear. You may keep every other area blur. but the point must be clear. Or else, audience will feel uncomfort and flip away.

終於完成左 Final Project, 有勁多不足的地方, 但也比大家睇睇, 請各位賜教.

http://www.hkhn.com/fish/Henry.mpg

(5:30m.......10mb)

e?師兄wo...
你好呀,你個段movie好勁呀,maya做的?
不過段片的畫面有o的起格...

你也是AC的嗎??
因為壓細左所以起格

系呀...
year1來的,多多指教~

AC 系咪即系art centre ? 請問教animation o既阿sir 系咪都系 animator 黎架 ?