由 A00017940 » 6日 11月 2012年, 00:06
The animation is not bad but could be better. Pay more attention on the weight shift for the hips, you should have rotated the hip on the Z-axis a lot for the poses of your characters here. And the overlapping and follow-through of the spine could be more fiulded but tune-down just a little and extended to the head. Just keep in mind that most of the actions your characters performed here would started from the hip and you will do just fine.
I like the timing and the clear poses for the first part of EN114A.
just my 2 cents