CGV - 投稿作品 (20/4/02)

[矢吹丈]

作者 : Feverheat steve

使用軟件 : Shade Professional
Time to create : 3 hours
E-mail : feverheat123@hotmail.com

Title : Apple Table with poster
希望可以俾D意見我!!

[Siegfried]

This is just my little opinion, sorry for critisizing.
Floor testure is too boring and rough. Viewer was confused whether it was plywood of carpet..
No reflection on the table.
No shading is found.
Flaw found on revolving spine, set the it higher.
There should be bump on the hanging cloth and cushion.
Mapping of the lady poster was projected plainly, so you will see stretched text under the poster.
And the most vital is the spot light, a spot light emphasize the main theme, but in your rendering it seems too many focus point to mention. There is also a room for improvement of camera angle, try focus on the apple with a lower location of camera, then apply DOF which out-focus and dim-lighted background.

[johngraphics]

[feverheat]

多謝你啊！！呢個系我未接觸Maya 之前既作品，記得果陣時連Bump map 都唔知道系乜野，見到做左果Dobject就乜都擺在圖裡，而家唔會啦，而家知道啦，多謝你俾到D咁有用既意見 :wink: thanks again !~~

不過你地覺唔覺得 Shade好難 modelling 啊！?
:)

[Siegfried]

It's not so difficult, it's just too free-form and you've not yet get used to it. But I found it hard to perform modelling for industrial design, yet the rendering is oK!And the desktop-user media needed to be improved as there were too many hot-keys to remember!