My animation assignment

[Woody晨]

http://sweb.cityu.edu.hk/50589778/bug.avi

請指教~

[HONG KONGer]

對翼閃下閃下, 點整架?

[liarliar]

系唔系 animatic o黎o架?
個造型幾得意呀

期待睇完整版o既較事內容 ^_^


由於我都整過有翼o既character
當時我疏忽左佢系o系空中o既感覺
後來老師都提出過呢個問題
不妨留意下啦

[liarliar]

對翼閃下閃下, 點整架?

其實我估....
佢只系一塊 Plain
拍下拍下咁
因為未有shading 同 lighting 同埋冇 modeling
所以o系受光唔受光o既Play Blast情況之下
咪好似閃下閃下咁囉 ^_^

[Woody晨]

無錯 , framerate 唔夠高所以閃o下閃o下 ~_~"

[timmy]

still alot of work to do. keep working.
the wing is too hard like a cardboard. You may consider make it soft. Keep in mind the line of action (I'm not sure did you learn this technique). the butterfly man's leg seem dead to me. there is no animation for his leg. try to relax the whole body...Also, the body fall down when the wing flip up and the body lift up when the wing flip down....
The shell's man look strange to me as well. specially both hands. need to relax the hand when the butterfly life him up. when they are flying out to camera. shell man's hand need to follow through the movement.... anyway, that is for now... still far away from final animation. work hard and don't give up

[liarliar]

still alot of work to do. keep working.
the wing is too hard like a cardboard. You may consider make it soft. Keep in mind the line of action (I'm not sure did you learn this technique). the butterfly man's leg seem dead to me. there is no animation for his leg. try to relax the whole body...Also, the body fall down when the wing flip up and the body lift up when the wing flip down....
The shell's man look strange to me as well. specially both hands. need to relax the hand when the butterfly life him up. when they are flying out to camera. shell man's hand need to follow through the movement.... anyway, that is for now... still far away from final animation. work hard and don't give up

oh, I think this is just the animatic only ^_^'

[timmy]

any improve animation upload?