無意識香港教育Poster - 請指教

[antony lau]

this set of Poster is talking about the HKedu problems.
希望大家可以可以從idea、design及CG給點意見
Size: A1

[antony lau]

Poster 02

[antony lau]

Poster 03

[Iori Keith]

三張Poster都很清晰的表達了主題, 而我個人比較喜歡第一張.
嘗試將第一張的三部洗衣機做得略有不同, 將第三張的一Notes放得不整齊一點, 可能會好一點. 另外第三張的血從紙邊落下不太似.
但你這三張Poster是否激進了點?

[badBoy]

首先從設計概念講起吧....
其實我會buy第1同第2張多d....
因為第3張無論visual同idea都有d勉強...
例如你唔能夠否定reading notes的價值.....除非你有另外的意思....
而visual方面,本書代表唔到notes 的感覺啦,我建議不如真系整到一疊notes仲好;而如果個粒眼珠系代表因為頂唔順睇得太多notes而搽掉出來的話,為什麼不是一雙而是一只,相信效果會更好?而系execution方面亦唔夠,例如粒眼珠會唔會殘殘地,或加多d神經線"chi"住去做到更加血腥和不寒而悸的感覺?會否有多d motion?眼珠向上又會唔會加強頂唔順的感覺?而家整體上會有太過平鋪直說的感覺,而眼球同notes的關系亦講得未夠.....
而第1張系execution上都犯左同樣問題....至於點改自己諗諗吧....
其實問題系好多細節未足夠...
而fonts方面亦唔夠,會唔會試下多一兩種font type,而唔系只得Arial?
顏色方面可試下加d紅色去表達warning的感覺....
其實整體都唔錯,不過有好多details都仲要tone......尢其系用緊single key visual的時候,要點樣做到一擊即中,仲要下番d功夫.....
以上純粹本人意見~

[HapZungLam]

the first one. yea, i agree with the pervious commands. One little thing also, if you can narrow down the 3 object's size. and give the whole poster more negative space will be nicer.

[Siegfried]

Agree.
Reducing the object and leave more white space, drop the shadow and create a larger contrast and focusing effect. But I don't think it is necessary to be too scary and blood, it is an image to express something, not to scare everyone to death, well, just my little comment, hope U don't mind.

[antony lau]

thx for your reply~~
你們的意見同我再學校聽到的好不同。真是又上多了一課！
我這三張CG都是在兩日做起的，在沒有時間而自己的技術又唔多好的情況下，texture同detail等方面都做得唔好，真慚愧！

[HapZungLam]

The colour of the blood is the most hardest colour to get. I never tired to challenge but i just have a thought . urr... it might be very insane, but it should work.

If you want to get the right colour for blood: hehe, make yourself bleed (or make someone bleed. what i mean, is get the real "blood"~~~) don't waste your time. get a"white piece" of cleanix or paper to get just a drop of the blood. Must do it quick, before it dries out. put it into a scanner to scan it. Record the RGB numbers and keep it in a save place. You don't want to make yourself bleed again right?