小弟制作的 Fungiland “菇菇樂園”，請指教

[noomo]

這四幅是小弟拖拖拉拉，花了成年時間完成的兒童漫畫 Fungiland，尚有很多未完善的地方，請指教。

這是第二版了，很多朋友叫我出動畫，恕我暫時無能為力，單是做一格已花我一天時間，已公余時間實在不能做到動畫，只能做漫畫。

猶疑了很久才在這裡發表，恐怕見笑， 見大家不吝嗇自己的大作，最終都鼓起勇氣發出來。相關網站都大致完成，有興趣可以 http://www.funginet.com 看看完整故事內容、設定、留言。

菇寨（一）


菇寨（二）


主角之一（包醒）


貨船

[HapZungLam]

Composition is very good. I guess you are very good at photography.

However, lightings and textures still need alot of work. Especially the ambien area. or did you turn off the globle light? seems like the gamma is too high. Pay more attension to details.

You are on the right track. keep it up

[Siegfried]

The character is interesting.
You can invest mote time in detail modelling of the buildings and lighing control, like the caustic light reflect from the lake to the castle and tree trunk.
Anyway, nice move, keep it up.

[noomo]

多謝兩位的評語，燈光的確是我花最少時間的地方，如果能把水影反映到樹干和牆身上就更好。這幾幅圖都是一次過 render ，沒有 composition。這套作品，同一個場景在不同的故事部份要用上好幾次，所以盡量都不想用 composition，以免增加工作時間。

另外由於 rendering power 不足，所以沒有用其他 lighting effect 例如 volumtic light、 radiosity，室外的甚至連 area light 都沒用上。增試過用這些巧果，結果一格 render 一天都未完成。

整套作品差不多共 200 格，當中人物共19個，加埋 test render 的時間，所以只能取個平衡，有機會會再打燈，再來一次。這是一次比較完整的嘗試，看看一個人用3D去制作一套漫畫當中會遇上什麼問題。

再次多謝兩位專業的評價。

[HapZungLam]

you may able to create fast and fake (but non accurate) soft area light.

You only need to render shadow as a seperate pass. go to photoshop and add gausian blur to all the shadow pass. composite back to your original. it is way faster and will have a better effects. but maybe as you said, you don't want to spend time on composition.

[Siegfried]

You can also assign a colored light to be a fake radiosity. Any picture the audience will see are just dot on a paper or pixels on the screen, it doesn't matter how you create them, it's the outcome that counts.